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中考作文常见问题
1.内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。
2.议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。
3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：I must learn English well. 就可以换成：It is important for me to learn English well.
4.结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。
5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也可以用用被动语态。
6.连接词/过渡词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如: to my surprise (让我惊讶的是), what’s more（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。
写作常用谚语：
1.No pains, no gains.
没有付出就没有收获。
2.Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
世上无难事，只怕有心人。
3.Practice makes perfect.
熟能生巧。
4.Pride goes before, and shame comes after.
骄傲使人落后。
5.Rome is not built in a day.
冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。
6.Seeing is believing.
眼见为实。
7.Strike the iron while it is hot.
趁热打铁。
8.Take things as they come.
既来之，则安之。
9. Action is the antidote to despair.
只要行动起来，一切低迷都会不治自愈。
10. Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者事竟成。
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佳文赏析
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢
遵守交通规则，如走人行道
参考词汇：
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy to see that it has made our life more convenient than ever. However, unfortunately, it has also brought many problems along with the benefits, such as heavy traffic and higher risks of accidents.
Traffic safety should be everyone’s concern. For the sake of our safety, we must obey the traffic rules at any time. For example, we must walk along the sidewalk; when crossing zebra-crossing, we should stop and look around before keeping walking. Ball playing on the road is definitely a no-no. We also have the responsibility to warn others not to drive after drinking, or to run red lights.
Every year, the loss of thousands of lives has been the cost of impulsive violation of traffic rules on the road. These alarming tragedies should be a wake-up callfor everyone to revere life and take traffic rules seriously.
分析： 本文内容方面充分回应题干中的要求，首段介绍大背景，引出车辆的普及带来的副作用，第二段重点讲述了交通安全隐患，以及各种应对的方法。语言精炼，丰富，最后一段高度归纳且对主题进行了升华，借由交通事故数量高居不下的现象，呼吁人们敬畏生命，尊重交规。此文可达到16-17分。
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翻译作业
昨天晚上八点的时候我在遛狗。
I was walking my dog at 8 last night.
很幸运我可以成为这个环保组织的一员。
I am fortunate to become a member of this environmental organization.
健康的身体是我们每个人拥有最宝贵的财富。
A healthy body is the most precious treasure that each of us could ever have.
HOMEWORK
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上讲作文
Q
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The person I respect most”
Use the following points as a reference
In trouble
Learn from
Encourage sb. to do
Make progress
The person I respect most
My father is the man I respect most. Stern as he may be, he never fails to show his care and consideration. Once I broke a neighbor's window. I would be in trouble, I thought. Seeing nobody around, I ran away immediately. When Dad came home, he noticed my nervousness and asked me what had happened.
I could only tell him the truth. Rather than scold me, he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize to our neighbor.
I learned from that experience that not only does Dad take care of our health, but he also teaches us how to be good citizens. How lucky I am to have such a good father!
分析：整篇文章简洁又到位，温暖而不虚伪。通过一件具体的事例从生活的细节之处描绘了一位父亲的形象，非常鲜明。语言方面也十分出彩，词汇运用准确却不难，句式使用了as的倒装让步状语从句，现在分词作非谓语动词，not only but also的倒装，感叹句等等。给这篇文章的语言注入了很多活力。其实看似越简单，越老生常谈的作文题，越难写。而这篇文章就是一个做得很好的典范，这篇全文可达18-19分。