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篇一：五年级英语作文My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn.In autumn,it is cool and windy.The sky is blue.The leaves are colourful.I can go to the farm and pick many fresh apples.I like autumn best,beacause I like Mid-Autumn Day vevy much.We can eat mooncakes.
我最喜欢的季节是秋天。秋天天气凉爽且多风。天空是蓝色的。树叶缤纷多彩。我可以去农场摘很多新鲜的苹果。我最喜欢秋天，因为我非常喜欢中秋节。我们可以吃月饼。
My favourite season is summer.It is hot and windy.In summer,I can swim in the lake.I can eat ice-cream and watermelons.I can also go to the nature park.There are many beautiful flowers and clean rivers in the park. I like summer best, beacause I like Children＇s Day vevy much.What about you
我最喜欢的季节是夏天。夏天天气炎热并且雨。在夏天，我可以在湖里游泳、吃冰欺凌和西瓜。我还可以去自然公园，哪里有漂亮的花和清澈的河流。我最喜欢夏天，因为我喜欢儿童节。你呢？
描述自己喜欢的季节，首先要点明最喜欢哪一个季节；然后介绍该季节的气候特征；接下来说明在这个季节可以从事那些有趣的活动；还可以描述这个季节的某些节日。常用的句型：My favourite season is +季节，it ＇s+表示天气的形容词，I can+动词原形+其他。和I like +季节+best,beacause……
篇二：八年纪下英语经典作文
1．你最喜欢四季中的哪个季节呢？请根据下面的提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示：
1. Which season do you like and why do you like it
2. What’s the weather like in ...
3. What do you like to do in ...
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 词数: 80词左右。
There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter. But spring is my favourite season. It usually comes in March in my city. In spring, the days get longer and longer and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. The trees become green and the flowers blossom. On windy days, I like to fly kites with my friends. I also like going for a walk in the morning because I like the fresh air outside. Do you like spring
2．我们身边有很多种植物，你对它们了解多少呢？请以“Plants around us”为题，根据下面的中文提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示：
1. 如果你仔细观察，你会发现我们身边有各种各样的植物，它们大部分是绿色的；
2. 世界上的植物分为两种：开花植物(flowering plants)和不开花植物(non-flowering plants)，它们各有不同；
3. 植物利用空气、水和阳光制造食物，而且它们能净化空气，人类的生存离不开植物。 要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 70词左右。
Plants around us If you observe carefully, you will find there are many different kinds of plants around us. And most of them are green. There are two types of plants in the world, flowering plants and non-flowering plants. They are different from each other.
Plants can make food from air, water and sunlight. They are very important. Plants can clean the air. And nobody can live without plants on the earth. So let’s plant more plants together!
3．同学们，你曾见过人们吃野生动物吗？你身边有穿皮草的人吗？现在又有多少动物正因此而濒临灭绝呢？请根据下面的提示写一篇70-80词的短文，要求语句通顺、前后连贯、语法正确。
提示：
1. 现在，越来越多的动物正濒临灭绝；
2. 人们砍伐树木导致动物的居住地减少，一些人为了金钱、毛皮(fur)和动物肉而猎杀动物，他们用动物毛皮做成各种衣服，用动物制成药物，一些人甚至去吃野生动物；
3. 动物是我们的朋友，保护动物就像是保护我们自己，所以尽全力保护它们吧。
More and more animals are in danger today.People cut down a lot of trees to build house so that animals have fewer places to live in. Some people kill animals for money, fur and meat. They make all kinds of clothes from the fur and use the animals to make medicine. A few people even eat wild animals.
Animals are our friends. Protecting animals is just like protecting ourselves. So try our best to protect them together.
4．本单元我们通过一些实验学习到了一些科学知识，并了解了这些科学知识在生活中的应用。请根据以下提示用英文给你的笔友Mike写一封电子邮件，总结一下这段时间你所学到的知识。
提示：
1. 上周科学课上做了一些实验，让我了解到……；
2. 科学非常有趣；
3. 将来也许会做一名科学家。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整；
2. 70-80词（邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike, How are you doingI made some experiments in the science class and learned some interesting theories last week. I learned that air was stronger than I thought. I also knew that when the candle burns, it needs the oxygen in the air. Sometimes, what we think is not right, but science can tell us what is correct.
In a word, science is interesting and the power of science is great! Maybe I’m going to be a great scientist in the future. What about youYours, Peter
5．人类的生存离不开植物，我们的周围有各种各样的花草树木，但是你知道怎样种树吗？请根据下面的提示以How to plant a tree为题写一篇短文。
提示：
1. 春天是适合种树的季节；
2. 首先挖坑，确保 (make sure that ...)挖的坑足够大、足够深，然后放入树苗，填土并用脚踩一踩 (stamp on)泥土，最后浇水。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整。
2. 70-80词。
How to plant a tree Trees are important to us. But do you know how to plant a treeNow, let me tell you about it. Spring is a good time to plant a tree. First, you should dig a hole. Make sure that the hole is big and deep enough. Then put the young tree into it. Cover the hole with some soil and stamp on the soil. Finally, water it carefully. This is how to plant a tree. Do you want to have a try
6．同学们，你们喜欢小动物吗？动物是人类的朋友，很多人都喜欢饲养小动物，它们不仅可以给我们带来快乐，还可以为我们做一些力所能及的事情。请根据提示以My Favourite Animal为题写一篇短文，和大家分享一下你和宠物之间有趣的故事吧！
提示：
1. What animals do you like
2. What pets do you raise
3. What’s the story about your pet
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整；
2. 80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My Favourite Animal something about my pet dog.My pet dog is called Beibei. He is white and he looks like a snowball. His eyes are big and black. He likes to play with me when I’m free. Every morning, Beibei brings my shoes to me when I get up. After supper, he likes to take a walk with me in the park. Beibei also helps my family look after our house when we are out. Beibei is clever, isn’t he
篇三：小学生英语作文大全(12篇)
1. 假期去过的地方
Last winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is in the north of China. We went there by train. In Beijing I visited the Tian’anmen Square. I climbed the Great Wall. I had a good time there. I love Beijing.
2. 假期计划
I am going to go to Beijing this summer holiday. Beijing is in the north of China. It’s very famous. I am going to go there by train. In Beijing I am going to climb the Great Wall. I am going to visit the Tian’anmen Square.
3. 描述图片中人物正在做的事情
Look at this picture. There are five people in it. Amy is reading a book. Sam is listening to music. Daming is flying a kite. Tom is playing with toys. Simon is riding a bike. They are very happy.
4. 喜欢的动物 My favourite animal
I like dogs very much. I have a pet dog. It’s very cute. Its name is Dudu. It’s black and white. It has got two big eyes and a small nose. It likes eating meat. It can run fast. It’s very clever. I often play with it.
5. 喜欢的季节
My favourite season is spring. In spring, it’s warm. There are lots of beautiful flowers. I can enjoy them. I can have a picnic in the park. I can fly a kite. I can do lots of interesting things. So I like spring.
6. 我的爱好
Collecting stamps is my hobby. I like stamps very much. I have got lots of stamps. Some stamps are about animals. Some stamps are about famous men and women. I have got Chinese stamps. But I haven’t got English stamps. Collecting stamps is interesting.
7. 喜欢的节日
My favourite festival is Spring Festival. At Spring Festival, I can play with my friends. I can eat lots of delicious food. I can get some money. We have a special meal. It’s a big family dinner. I love Spring Festival.
8. 梦想
I have a dream. I want to be an English teacher. Because I like English. I think English is interesting and useful. I can speak English well. Now I study very hard. I hope my dream will come true.
9. 我的学校
My school is very big and beautiful. In our school there are some tall buildings. The walls are white. The windows are bright. In our school there are lots of pupils and teachers. The pupils study hard. The teachers work hard. I love my school.
10. 喜欢的运动
Playing basketball is my favourite sport. Because it’s very interesting. I have got a basketball. I play basketball every day. My friends like basketball, too. I often play with my friends. I hope to be a basketball star.
11. 我的朋友 My friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Amy. She is twelve years old. She has got two big eyes. She is tall. She is friendly. She likes reading books. She can speak English well. She wants to be a teacher. We all like her.
12. 自我介绍
My name is Amy. I am twelve years old. I have got two big eyes. I am tall. I am friendly. I like reading books. I can speak English well. I can play basketball. But I can’t swim. I want to be a teacher.
篇四：2014年4月大学英语B统考十套模拟题作文范文
大学英语B模拟题作文范文
（一）
Happy Things in My Childhood
1.介绍主要童年趣事；
2.描述一件主要趣事。
I had a happy time in my childhood. I did many interest things then. Here are some of them.
I spent my childhood time in my hometown, a small village located in southern China. There is a small and clean river going around my village. So my little friends and I often go to play there. Think what we did at the riverWe swimmed in the river. We caught kinds of fishes. We played football from dawn to the dark. Among these things, I like fishing best. Yes, we called it fishing, although we didn’t have any tools and skills. What we only had was our hands.
（二）
My Favorite Season
1．说明自己最喜欢的季节；
2．陈述喜欢这一季节的原因，可以描写这一季节的景色，或是记述在这一季节最让人难忘的经历。
There four seasons in a year, among which I like summer best. WhyI have three reasons here. Firstly, that is because I can wear less clothes in the summer season. I hate the feeling having too much clothes on my body.
Secondly, I can swim in summer. I like swimming. When I am swimming in a pool, I feel like a fish, which in my eye is the freest animal on this planet. I have been wanted to become a fish from my childhood time.
Finally, natural scenes are at their most beautiful time in summer.
（三）
My Favorite Form of Entertainment
1.现代人越来越重视娱乐；
2.娱乐方式丰富多彩，而我最喜欢的是……
3.我选择的原因。
In modem society, people pay more and more attention to entertainment than before.
There are many forms of entertainment, but my favorite form of entertainment is watching TV in my spare time .After a day of hard work, I look forward to a good relaxation and watching TV is a good means of relaxation. The pleasant music on TV can keep me away from tension and fatigue, The exciting movies and TV play series can make me enjoy different kinds of life as if I an the actor in it ,and the Education TV service offers teaching programs on all subjects to me. In a word, watching TV really entertains me a lot.
（四）
1.你学习英语的主要理由；
2.说明学习英语给你带来的益处。
Why I Study English I learn English for in modern society, English becomes more and more important. There are two points on this. One is that we should work hard to learning English well in order to follow the present international development. The other is that we study English only for college, so we needn't learn it and after the graduation we won't be able to use it. I agree with the first one because English is a language spoken by billons of people and now is playing an important role within international business and trade. AndEnglish is the spoken language in the UN. So it is of importance to learn it well. We should know well about the world. learning it well will help you show yourself to the world。
（五）
1.简单介绍中国新年即春节；
2.你最喜欢的新年庆祝活动。
The Chinese New Year The Chinese New Year is an important festival for Chinese people all over the word. It is also called The Spring Festival or The Lunar New Year.
The exact date of the festival on the western calendar changes from year to year. However The Chinese New Year take place from January 1st to February 19th.
On the Chinese calendar every year has an animal's name. These animals are rat, ox, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, ram, monkey, rooster, dog and pig. A Chinese legend says these twelve animals had a race, the first year was named after the rat, the winner. The other eleven years were named according to the order the animals arrived in the race. The clever rat jumped on the ox's back, and then ate the end jumped over the ox's head to arrive first.
The Chinese believe that the people born on the particular year has some of the animal’s characteristics of that animal/
（六）
1.网络教育的优势；
2.你选择网络教育的理由。
Online Education
Nowadays, there is tendency that more and more people decide to take courses on line. Life education have formed its new shape: online education.
From my point of view, the reasons for this are that: modern people have an increasing pace of life and have no other choice to take better education, and the internet solve the problem by its unique superior. It have many schedule to take and reduce the distinct of space. Besides, we can make a face-to-face communication by internet just like having a private teacher.
I support this new way to study. How comfortable it is to learn what I need in anytime I want and browse numbers of useful information without leaving home for a step! I hold the point that, there
must will be broad future for online education to grow. And it will do many people a help to get further development.
（七）（八）（九）同前
（十）
选择一个你想旅游的地点，并安排旅行计划。你应包括下列内容：
1.说明你想旅游的地点；
2.说明你为什么选择这个地点；
3.描述你的旅行计划。
This winter holiday, I want to go to Beijing. Because it is very beautiful city with a long history. And I really want to visit the Great Wall, it’s so famous.
I plan to travel four days. The first day, I will go to Beijing by plane. I will arrive there in the afternoon. In the evening, I plan to go shopping in the Wangfujing Street to buy some present for my friend. In second day, I will go to the Summer Palace. The next day, I’m going to the Great Wall. At last, I will come back by plane, too.
Written and edited by Li Ning
篇五：英语作文范例
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My Favourite Food Do you know what this is Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that isGuess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about youWhat’s your favourite food
【要领点评】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’mhelpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about youAre you helpful, too
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
In The Kitchen This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are theseThey look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are thoseThey are grapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!
【要领点评】
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。
My Seasons
We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。
时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。
注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。
My Birthday Party
Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my party, we can do many things:
1. Light the candles.
2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song.
3. Make a wish.
4. Blow out the candles.
5. Cut off the cake.
6. Eat the cake.
7. Open the presents.
8. Sing and dance.
9. Watch videos or play other games.
10. Say goodbye with each other.
That’s my birthday party, is it interesting
写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动，比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。
时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：
1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。
2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。
3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。
句型：invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误：
eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。
My family
There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。 时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。
句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。
注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。
In the park
It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doingOh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。
时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。
句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他
现在进行时：（1）What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他
（2）主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。
Li Ying ’S Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancingNo, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancingNo, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。
Don’t be against the traffic rules
I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.
If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。
小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。
I Love My Family
Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boyHe is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane.
I love my family.
【要领点评】
一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？
小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？
How to get to the science museum
We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum
The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the science museum.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢？通过你的叙述，能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路线够清晰吧！
小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚，然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄明白。
Planting Trees
It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees.
I want to plant a tree in our garden. Dad and Mum are very happy. They like green. Dad helps me plant the tree. First, we dig the soil. Then I put a little tree into the soil. Next I water it. I am so excited and I wait for the tree to grow. Two weeks later, my tree has some little leaves. I water it every day. Now it has lots of leaves. It grows fast.
We should plant more trees. They make our world beautiful.
【要领点评】
小作者写了一次植树的经历，但他并没有单纯拘泥于植树的过程。既有过程，也有感觉，能使文章打动读者，给人以启发。作文的最后一段就非常好，两句话胜似千言万语。我们可以学习一下这种写法。 既描述过程，又适时提自己的看法或想法的写法，在作文中叫做“夹叙夹议”,描述过程为了提出一种思想服务，提出看法或想法使原本平实的描述有了意义。我们在以后的写作中也可以试一试。
Let’s have a nice day It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.
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怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”？有两点不能忘记，一是安排得充实，二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了，上午去书店看书买书，中午在饭店吃饭，下午去颐和园玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！文章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，文笔也很优美。
小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等，使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情，还是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的事情，以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情，那么就要注意在表述时多用“be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要，那就是故事的线索要交代好，让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。
My friend and I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!
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