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Unit1
【题目要求】你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。 要求：（1）内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；（2）书写认真，句子通顺；（3）词数：60词左右。
【优秀满分范文】Jack is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day. I think he should take breaks away from the computer. He shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night. I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.
Unit2
【题目要求】你们班下周要进行英语演讲比赛, 主题是My life in 20 years。请你写一篇短文, 畅想一下二十年后的生活, 包括学习、工作、居住环境、生活等的变化。
【优秀满分范文】My life in 20 yearsIn 20 years, I think I will be a tour guide because I like to travel.
As a tour guide, I will go to different places of interest and meet a lot of tourists. I will learn several kinds of foreign languages because I will meet tourists from different countries. I will live in Yongchuan. Because it’s a beautiful city. And I will also get married. I will have a beautiful wife and two children. I love the nature, so I will go hiking with my family.
I’m sure my life will be very wonderful in the future.
Unit3
【题目要求】假如你是David，下面是一张做家务的情况表。请根据所给的信息写一篇短文，谈谈你和家人所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法，要求内容完整，语句通顺，80字左右。
【优秀满分范文】I’m David. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I. My father does the dishes on weekends. He sweeps the floor on Wednesdays. My mother cooks meals everyday. She washes clothes on Tuesdays and Saturdays. As for me, I do the dishes on weekdays. I take out the rubbish everyday. I sweep the floor on weekends. I think it’s necessary for us students to do chores. Doing chores can help to develop our independency, and we can learn to take care of ourselves.
Unit4
【题目要求】李梅最近睡不好，她父母想要她取得好成绩，送她去各种课外俱乐部，她压力很大，不知道怎么办。假如你是Tom，请给她一些建议。
【优秀满分范文】Dear Li Mei,I’m sorry to hear that you have too much pressure and don’t sleep well at night. Your parents want you to get good grades，so they send you to all kinds of after-school clubs including language learning, music, math classes and so on. And you really don’t know what to do.I think your parents really love you and they hope you have a wonderful future. If you feel uncomfortable, there are many things you can do. You could talk about it with your parents. You should tell them that kids need more free time to relax. At the same time, you should study hard and try your best to get good grades.Best wishes! Yours,Tom
Unit5
【题目要求】Susanna所在的城市昨天晚上发生了一场地震。很幸运，地震并不强烈，他们全家安然无恙。假如你是Susanna请描述一下地震发生时家里人的活动情景，80词左右。
【优秀满分范文】My name is Susanna. In our city, there was an earthquake at 8:32 yesterday evening. At that time, I was taking a shower in the bathroom. My motherwas cleaning up the kitchen and my father was watching TV in the livingroom. My elder sister Alice was working on her computer in her room. We were very scared. Luckily, the earthquake was not heavy and it didn’t last long. And we were all safe.
Unit6
【题目要求】同学们对“愚公移山”的故事一定有着很深的印象吧？请根据本单元所学内容及下面的提示词语，以The story of YuGong为题，把“愚公移山”的故事用英语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语：90，move themountains, zhisou, die, sons, grandsons, continue, god, be moved, help
【优秀满分范文】The story of YuGongOnce upon a time, there was an old man called YuGong. Although he was almost 90, he decided to move the mountains. A clever man called Zhisou said,“you are too old to move the mountains.”Yugong said,“If Idie, my sons still do this, and if my sonsdie, my grandsons continue doing this.”then a god was movedby Yugong, so he sent two gods to help him. From this story, I learn that anything is possible if we work hard.
Unit7
【题目要求】做为一个中国人，你对我们的中国了解多少呢？请给你在美国的笔友Dave 写封信，向他介绍你的祖国。80 词左右，恰当运用比较级和最高级，可适当发挥。 中国是亚洲最大的国家。和美国差不多大。 中国有世界上最多的人口。人们友好勤劳。 长江是世界最长的河流之一。 中国有超过 5000 的悠久历史。比美国的历史长多了。 中国有世界最高山峰。 词汇：as…as, population，the Yangtze River ,the third longest ,much longer, Qomolangma
【优秀满分范文】Dear Dave, I’m happy to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China. China is the biggest country in Asia. It’s almost as big as the USA. China has the biggest population in the world. The people here are friendly and hard-working. The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world. China is over 5000 years old. It has a much longer history than the US. The Qomolangma is the highest mountain in the world. I love China very much. Welcome to China and play with me. Yours,Li Lei
Unit8
【题目要求】介绍你读过的一本书。Robinson Crusoe提示：1.我是一个书迷，我读过很多书 2.我已经读了《鲁滨逊漂流记》。它是一本有趣的书。 3.Robinson Crusoe 是一个勇敢的人。年轻的时候，他梦想着在大海上航行。 4.长大以后，他在一个岛上独自生活了 28 年。他总是努力面对任何危险。 5.这个故事激励着我。 提示词：book lover, have finished , dream of sailing, live alone, encourage
【优秀满分范文】A book I have read As a book lover, I have read a lot of books. I have finished reading Robinson Crusoe. This book is very interesting. Robinson was a brave man. When he was young, he dreamed of sailing on the sea. After he grew up, he lived on an island alone for 28 years. He always tried to face any danger. His stories encouraged me deeply. I love Robinson.
Unit9
本单元围绕话题“曾经去过的地方”展开，使用现在完成时表达已经做过的事情。表达的时候不要单独使用一种时态，应多个时态交叉使用。
【题目要求】
假如你到过济南旅游过几次，那里的植物园（Botanical Garden）,趵突泉（Baotu Spring） 大明湖(Daming lake)，动物园，以及交通，购物等给你留下了深刻印象。80—100 词左右。请用英语写一篇来分享一下你的游历。 提示词：have been to, fall in love with , have fun , such as , would like to, guide
【优秀满分范文】Have you ever been to Jinan? I have been there several times. I think it’s really a beautiful city. I fell in love with it when I first travelled there. There are some beautiful places to have fun , such as Baotanical Garden, Baotu Spring and Daming Lake. In the zoo, you can see many kinds of animals walking around and some are sleeping. You can easily buy what you want. Because there are lovely restaurants and fantastic gift shops everywhere. Buses and taxis can take you where you want to go.Welcome to Jinan. I would like to be your tour guide.
Unit10
【题目要求】
某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，“The changes in my hometown”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
过去：生活贫困，房屋破旧。污染严重，垃圾遍地。交通不便，游客很少。 现在：住房宽敞明亮，许多人有了自己的汽车。山更绿了，水更清了，天更蓝了。每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。 将来：
请你展望家乡的未来。
【优秀满分范文】The Changes In My Hometown In the past, my hometown was very small, and people lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are clearer and the sky are bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year , thousands of people from all over the world come to our city. I’m sure it will get richer and more beautiful in the future. I love my hometown.
英语书面表达是整个高考试卷中难度最高的一项，但同时也是非常有可能有较大突破的一个项目。我们需要争取在考前30天，通过一定量的训练，把书面表达提升一个档次。
一、审题
审题需要从下列五个方面进行：
1）体裁（文体）
2）题材（要点）
3）结构
4）时态
5）人称
下面以2020年5月天津英语第一次高考题为例，我们一起进行审题。
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假设你是晨光中学的李津；下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议，探讨如何利用网络学习英语，请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：
(1)介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点)；
(2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法；
(3)请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Goodmorning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. rd like to take this opportunity totalk about how I learn English on the Internet._____________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Thankyou.
第一步先确定作文的体裁。题目的提示中已经明确说明“撰写一篇发言稿”，且作文部分的开头和结尾都已经给出，所以，我们就应该按照发言稿（演讲稿）的要求去写，不可以与其它文体混淆，如遇书信体混淆。
撰写发言稿时，我们应该想着“我写的东西，是要我自己念给别人听的。”也就是说，要把听众的感受考虑在内。比如，使用更多的短句，使用更简单且意义更明确的词汇。长句、或结构复杂的句子，在演讲稿中是不适用的，因为这会给听众造成理解上的困难。
第二步确定文章要点。题目的提示中已经非常清楚地列出了我们要表达的3个要点，即(1)介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点)；(2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法；(3)请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。我们就按照顺序，把这三个要点表达完整清楚就可以了。
第三步确定文章结构。“三段式”结构永远是经典的篇章结构，因为“三段式”结构清楚、收放自如。
因为作文中给出了开头第一句，我们就可以把这句话当成作文的第一段，我们直接从第二段（正文部分）开始写起，这一部分可以包括要点中的第一要点和第二要点。我们可以把第三要点放到第三段中去表达。
第四步确定作文时态。要点中没有要求我们讲述自己的网上学习经历，而是要求我们写出网上学习的方式（如何），因此，作文的基本时态应该确定为现在时。
第五步确定作文人称。要点要求“介绍你……、简单谈谈你……”，因此确定作文的人称应该以第一人称为主。
二、草稿（提纲）
审题结束后，就应该打草稿（列提纲）了。我们可以列提纲如下：
P1：
（已经给出）
P2：
1. …attend onlineclasses
2. learn grammar…know more about culture
3. choose from therich resources
4. watch movies
5. benefit
P3:
1. hear about yourideas
列提纲后，我们就可以在脑子里把作文从头至尾过一遍，感觉有必要修改的地方在进行一下修改，然后就可以定稿誊抄了。
三、誊抄
作文结构好、内容齐全、表达顺畅流利，这些是“赏心”；字迹工整、卷面整洁，这叫“悦目”。如果我们的作文能做到“赏心悦目”，岂有不得高分的道理。
高考答题卡给我们15行书写，如果大家能写满13-14行，总词数在120左右，那就非常完美。提倡衡水体书写。
下面是2020年5月天津英语第一次考试的书面表达范文。
Good morning, my friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.
I regularly attend online classes given by expert teachers, where I can not only learn new knowledge such as new grammar rules but also communicate with my online classmates. Besides, I like to watch movies in English, helping me a lot in learning about the western culture as well as improving my listening and speaking. In addition, there are rich resources on the Internet, from which I can choose what I think is the most useful for my English learning. In a word, I find online learning is an effective way of learning English.
I believe that you have your ideas about learning English on the Internet and we would like to hear about them.(115)
Thank you.
几个常问的问题：(Q& A)
1. 作文写得字数越多越好吗？
否。高考书面表达规定了“词数不少于100”，评分标准中也明确说明，“词数不够的，需要在得分中减去2分”；但并不是说写得越多分数会越高。如果大家能用101个词，满足写作各项要求，就有充分理由得到高分。按一般理解，总词数以不超过所要求词数的20%为宜，即总词数最好控制在120词以内。有时候，写得越多，出现错误的几率也就越大，被扣分的可能性也会随之增加。
2.用作文模板能得高分吗？
否。虽然模板能帮助我们写出比较漂亮的句子，但要看模板是不是适合考题所要求的题材和体裁。得体性也是阅卷者决定给不给高分需要考虑的标准之一。
3.多背范文会有用吗？
会。“脑中有物，作文无忧”。凡是我们通过说和写表达出来的东西，一定是预先在我们脑子中有所储存。虽然不一定100%相同，但因有丰富的基础素材，我们的强大的大脑就可以利用这些素材创造出我们所需要的东西。
4.多写作文会有助于提高吗？
会。有意识的写作的确会提升我们的作文水平。需要我们按照要求完成“审题、草稿（提纲）、修改、定稿、誊抄”整套程序，然后最好请老师面批面改，之后是再次修改、定稿、誊抄，再之后就需要集成自己的范文库。修改过程是作文水平提升的过程。如果能做到自己修改、自我完善，我们的作文水平会很快很显著地提升。
5.我的作文为啥得不到高分？
需要客观分析。我们可以把作文大体上分成两种：一是写得对；二是写得好。“对”是“好”的基础；“好”一定是建立在“对”的基础之上。所谓“对”，简单理解就是没有语法和拼写错误。如果能做到这一点，及格分（15）大概率可以保证；在此基础上，如果我们作文中结构合理、用词得当、句型丰富，那就没有理由不得高分。
反过来，有的同学一味追求所谓高级词汇和高级句型，而忽略了得体性和语法的正确性，出现了较多或较大的语法错误，也会导致得不到高分。
因此，写出语法正确的句子十分重要。建议在此前提下，再考虑更复杂的句型和更高级的词汇，才是明智之举。
6.打草稿浪费时间，直接在答题卡上写行吗？
不赞成。首先要给作文留出足够的时间。一般来说，25分钟到30分钟为宜。利用5分钟审题、10分钟草稿（+修改）、10分钟工整誊抄，足可以非常完美地完成。直接在答题卡上写，不可避免地会产生涂改，造成卷面的不整洁。
考试的各个项目都会有自己的性价比，千万不应该因为前面某一项用时过多，而压缩书面表达的作答时间。还是建议大家多做限时训练，规定时间内，完成规定任务。